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Old 04-04-10, 08:41 PM
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Default Lady in the fishbowl

Joanne, I really like the flowing shapes of the fish, and the composition in this (I know you mentioned there is a little more not visible here too).

Maybe consider softening the girl's face, and toning down the white of her eyes and teeth (a little bluish cast perhaps) to push her back and the fish forward in space more.
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