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Old 13-04-11, 05:24 PM
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Default Vanishing Point - Crow/Old house for critique

Hi. I have finished my first ET.
It measures 24" wide and 20" high. Please supply me with any advice and constructive criticisms.
I should mention the photo on the left was photographed inside under studio lighting (very warm) and the one on the right was photographed today on a bright cloudy day which is much closer to the original.

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Old 15-04-11, 02:23 PM
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lookin' good
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Old 15-04-11, 02:32 PM
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Thanks Salamander! Now the fun begins.

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Old 15-04-11, 09:22 PM
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It's beautiful! It reminds me of Lovecraft: like there is more going on than initially meets the eye.
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Old 16-04-11, 12:11 AM
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Thanks Vermillion. What is Lovecraft?

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Old 16-04-11, 02:58 PM
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Sorry, Stephen, I tend to assume everyone is familiar with HP Lovecraft. He is an author of, well, I guess you could say psychologically-spooky short stories. It is the sense of tension and mysterious undercurrents to your painting that made me think immediately of Lovecraft's style of writing. I wonder what has happened, and what will happen, beyond this small snapshot you have taken of this scene. In other words, it is thought provoking.
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