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Old 10-03-07, 06:08 PM
JeanM JeanM is offline
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Hello Sabine. I agree with all the above comments. You're very generous to share your work with this forum. One question about the boy: Why doesn't his right arm show extending from his sleeve?
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Old 10-03-07, 08:03 PM
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Don't thank me for sharing my work, I thank you for commenting it ;) - painting alone all day long I just don't "really" see it after a while, I need fresh eyes!!

David, the boy was painted after a photograph, yes, but if there is a deformation of the face I'm probably the one responsible for that! though my son DOES have quite round cheeks ;)

Jean, I think I understand your question, but I'm not sure - the shoulder of the right arme doesn't appear to be in the right position according to the movement of the arm? Well... that's true!! I hadn't seen it... and have no explanation... (but it will be hidden by the frame I think!!)
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