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Old 29-10-09, 04:44 PM
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Old 30-10-09, 09:47 PM
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It's lovely work. I admire how well you've rendered the different textures, the glow of the black grapes and the odd tightness of the green ones (they *are* like that, aren't they) and the wonderful pebbly texture of the leaves. Oh, and the leaves' incredibly delicate edge. It's quite beautiful.
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Old 31-10-09, 11:23 AM
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It's lovely work. I admire how well you've rendered the different textures, the glow of the black grapes and the odd tightness of the green ones (they *are* like that, aren't they) and the wonderful pebbly texture of the leaves. Oh, and the leaves' incredibly delicate edge. It's quite beautiful.
thanks for the beautifulst comment to my job. Thanks for your sensibility of reading!
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Old 31-10-09, 01:52 PM
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Beautiful arrangement, Enrico. I like the way you have the light both bouncing off of and shining through the membranes of the leaves. The two shades of green; back and front. And the two shades and characters of the grapes. Still lifes either work for me or leave me cold. This one sings! Congratulations on a job well done.
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Old 31-10-09, 02:19 PM
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i wonder how large this painting is. it's really well done.
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Old 01-11-09, 07:19 PM
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Beautiful arrangement, Enrico. I like the way you have the light both bouncing off of and shining through the membranes of the leaves. The two shades of green; back and front. And the two shades and characters of the grapes. Still lifes either work for me or leave me cold. This one sings! Congratulations on a job well done.
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Ciao Phil,
I am a lot honored of your comment to my job also because he describes
very well my study on the light.
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Old 01-11-09, 07:22 PM
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i wonder how large this painting is. it's really well done.
Thanks Jim,
the painting measure cm 70x50
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Another great painting Enrico!!!

See you in June.

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VERY VERY NICE!!
Absolutely fantastic! Great presence, mood and rendering!
Well done.
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Wicked nice work!
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